When I first saw you and you smiled, I said there goes a gentleman.
When we spoke to each other for the first time, I knew that you were a catch. I wonder if you had someone. You didn’t show it at all. I, like a stupid fool went for you. You didn’t say yes BUT you didn’t say no. Instead of telling me that you had someone, I had to find out from someone else.
WHERE DO WE GO FROM HERE???
Why didn’t you tell me??? I would have left you alone and kept it to a simple flirtation. But now I can’t even look you straight in the eye. What happened to us being friendly ??
why did you let it go to far??
Now we are beyond the point of being comfortable in each others presence. What a shame that is... I am just a simple girl in this world looking for some company and I thought you were it. I now realize that you are really a boy in a man’s body(no match for this girl)......
I know where we go from here....
It is time for me to say thank you for the fun and games that you let me play. You came into my life for a reason and now it is time for it to end for that same reason. THANK YOU AND GOOD-BYE..
Yvonne griffin
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Written December 20th, 2001
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a mumble for the hope lost
hey pal; even this brings in the sadness.Things like this would have happened to many of us.good expressions of feelings.kee p going. -
Jesus, healer of the broken-hearted!
This reminds me of a song long time ago. One that I heard and it made me take a chance just like you. The catch phrase was, "I'll never know if I'm right or I'm wrong for loving you, but I'd rather be sorry for something I've done than something I didn't do. Ha! Or maybe I wrote it in my life ~ the deep dark one before I found Christ. There is no other love like "agape" love. -
nice job, keep writing, and thanks for commenting on my poem
you did a great job.
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I love this. Keep up the good writing. -
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The title reminded me of a song from Moulin Rouge, why I read this. A good one here. Relationships takes cycle's and this is one of those cycle's.
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Extremely well done,,,,I could go on about all you said
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Excellent expression of disapointment. Why do people do the things they do when hearts are at risk? You may enjoy my 'Let It Go' poem. It deals with this type of relationship. Thank you for sharing.
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Way to be strong..don't let a jerk like this get you down. There are too many of them. I just hope the other woman doesn't get hurt as well. Hugs.. very good writing.
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