These sleepless nights, with blazing lights
Misfortune to behold
Death's pale hand, with silver bands
Another soul is sold
Echoes of a love gone stale
The gentle kiss of stone
Jaded lives beyond that veil
Of seeded lies and bone
A contest entry
- III Pre-Writes! by Lj-.
345 points, ended January 7, 2007, 25 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - round one; your best prewrite. by August Starlight.
765 points, ended March 21, 93 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love it, definitely not what I expected when I read the title. Great write! Thanks for entering and good luck.
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Wow!!! I can't think of any other word to describe this better than, wow.
This amazing, I loved every part. Your rhyming was awesome.
Thank you so much for entering this great piece,
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awesome
another great write
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Tyvm. I love your icon btw. ^_^
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cant seem to grasp it but its a good poem nun the less!
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To be honest, I don't even know what it's about. ^^ It just came out and I liked it so I put it up here. lol
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Good stuff
Thank God someone here actually knows how to write a darker poem.
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