Two years on I still feel the same.
Losing my child has caused this pain.
I think about her over and over again.
I look down in to my very soul.
And I remember the day my heart went cold.
On that very sad December day.
I remember as my hand it trembled.
As I tried to cut a piece of her hair.
So she would be remembered.
I tried to do it with such care.
I kissed her face of stone and cried .
Just a memory of the day my Nikki died.
Life goes on and I stay the same.
No one will really know my pain.
And I know a life time of tears
wont bring her back again.
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I can understand your pain, because I have lost a daughter as well.
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this is such beautiful sentiments toward a loved one. You have great talent. Thanks for sharing.
Rose/ princessoffire
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As one who has lost 6 unborn young I can relate to this a lot and although they say time is a great healer there is never a day that passes when I don't think about my babies and feel such an overwhelming feeling of loss. This may not be the most excellently written piece of poetry but I commend you for having the courage to write about it. Well done and the best of luck for the future.
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This was good, but very sad. It's always painful when you've lost a loved one no matter how much time passes. Peace and God Bless.
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I'm Sorry! Lots of heartfelt writing here. Great Job, your expression was right on.
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