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I Am...

...  Overwhelmed
      By the
      Surety that we are fated to be together.
...  Exhilarated by your mere presence: your
      Scent when you’re close to me, your
      Smile when you look in my eyes, your
      Energy when you hold me close.
...  Drowning in the desire you arouse

      Within every fiber of my being.
...  Insanely addicted
      To your touch, to your voice, to your
      Hands, to your kiss.

...  Yours already, and always will be.
...  Only wanting you, and
      Unable to quit.


Author notes

Acrostic (the first letter of each line, taken together, form words)

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  • Lady-Pegasus
    April 20, 2007
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    Oh yes, again so well relatable, and it is something I can tell you is even more delectable when the obsession is returned, teehee I truly liked this piece it seems near perfect in it's entirety. Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e *

    YOU HAVE JUST BEEN HOODWINKED ; Courtesy of the Poetic Bandits


  • Poetress52 gold member
    December 23, 2006

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    Awesome

    This is beautiful, soft, warm and romantic, yet storng very strong feeling .I really got into this one, Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work


  • tanzanite
    December 18, 2006

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    Wonderful use of elipsis sis. Overwhelmed, Exhilirated, Drowning, Insanely, Yours, Only ...
    Did you notice the power of that? Your emotion pulses through every word and I love that about your work. You should fall in love more as it elevates your work to higher levels. Well done on this wonderfully eloquent piece of work

    • silversoliloquysong
      December 18, 2006
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      thanks, sis

      no, sis, i hadn't noticed the power of the words that continue the "I am..." until you pointed that out... Thanks!!! and how could they not be powerful, considering my feelings? as for falling in love more... i am everyday (and i don't think that i will again in this lifetime)!


  • Polaja Greeters member
    December 17, 2006
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    Aw! This is an amazing poem, and being an acrostic (which I admit I missed until I read the author notes) makes it even more brilliant. I love how much emotion you have placed in this poem and . . . just wow.

    Good luck in my contest and thankyou for your entry.

    Polly

    • silversoliloquysong
      December 18, 2006
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      thanks, sweetie

      for your wonderful comment, and for holding a contest themed with something i had already decided to write a poem about

      love,
      C~

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