She stands on the tree branch,
Knowing no one cares what happens.
Is she a fairy? Or is she a nymph?
She watches as the other creatures are talking.
She sits on the branch hearing her sisters talk,
She knows there more important,
As they don't mention her name.
Of course the other creatures look at the amazed and in awe,
As she is just abanded;left alone.
She sighs as their happy ,
Talking about their boyfriends;
Hugging, kissing and holding.
She hn's and glares at them,
Knowing they don't care how she feels.
She's alone and meant to be it,
No matter how much she doesn't want to admit it.
She holds back a growl knowing what this fairy/nymph is,
She isn't one of these beatiful temping fabels.
She truely is a creature of the night;
She is meant to kill,
She was nice and kind.
People used that to that for advantages,
They didn't care,
She growls deep in her throat.
As the sunny day turned to a dark cloudly night,
Thunder destroying the forset.
As the storm ends she turns and hides as a fairy/nymph,
Knowing no one will suspect her,
They didn't see her do it.
No one cares to ask her;just the other creatures,
She sighs holding her fragile body.
She knows she is a monster,
But she doesn't want to admit it to others.
She holds in to herself and lets it out when she needs to,
The fairy/nymph is just hiding herself,
As her sisters gets all the credit and glory.
Bella Knoll
11:58am 12/17/06
Author notes
Things we lost in the fire
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wow this is awesome just what i was hoping for something different
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6th line in, spellin error: there should be they're.
U have a very fairy name. Knoll bein assosiated wid faeries an all. Im called bella 2. coincidence. -
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Yay! Something a bit differnt! I wasn't sure which option this was supposed to be for though, so if you could tell me that'd be great =]
Loved this as it was differnt from other entries I've had, so is really refreshing to read somthing new! Thanks so much for sharing, you're a very tallented poet and this is a great write. My favourtie line was
She isn't one of these beatiful temping fabels
I just loved how you descibed het this way, really added to the feel of the poem =]
Just a few grammar notes =]
She knows there more important
Should be 'they're more'
And She sighs as their happy
Should also be 'they're happy' not important but just means everything is then perfect =] (please don't take this offencively, I'm forever making grammar and spelling mistakes!)
Thanks for entering =]
Frankie xXx
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This was quite a sad, strange story. Aww she turned evil at the end! I liked this very much. It is a story well told.
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Well, I already told you what I think of it, but I'll tell you again. Ok, Bella? lol I LOVE IT! =D =D Your writing is soooooooo amazing! I just love it! haha Love you sis ;]
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