my life...
has fooled me...
I have no knowledge.
I am small...
The world is big...
I float in space.
You were there...
Handing out time like it stops in minutes...
I had no idea,
I polish teeth with lies.
to keep me sane...
just to keep breathing...
I'll find the real you someday...
miniscule me.
ethereal you.
Author notes
confusing it for something else...
Please tell me what you think
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wow i commented on it but i dont remember reading it at all...sorry im such a loser...i like the "i'll find the real you someday..." though it scares me...anyway good poem
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this poem is amazing honestly it really gave me this chill and it makes me want to know who it is about i loved it thanks for sharing
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wow, thank you. It's not about a who, so much as a what. "you were there..." "I'll find the real you..." Love and real love. The lies part pointed to believing they were real.
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kinda confusing...glad to see your posting new stuff though....i'm sorry we havnt talked latly at like all... i really do hope your doing good




