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Fool

my life...
has fooled me...
I have no knowledge.

I am small...
The world is big...
I float in space.

You were there...
Handing out time like it stops in minutes...
I had no idea,

I polish teeth with lies.
to keep me sane...
just to keep breathing...

I'll find the real you someday...
miniscule me.
ethereal you.

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  • nobodys-girl
    March 26, 2007

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    wow i commented on it but i dont remember reading it at all...sorry im such a loser...i like the "i'll find the real you someday..." though it scares me...anyway good poem


  • ArmorXForXSleep
    December 18, 2006

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    this poem is amazing honestly it really gave me this chill and it makes me want to know who it is about i loved it thanks for sharing

    • eastbrook
      December 19, 2006
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      wow, thank you. It's not about a who, so much as a what. "you were there..." "I'll find the real you..." Love and real love. The lies part pointed to believing they were real.

  • nobodys-girl
    December 18, 2006

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    kinda confusing...glad to see your posting new stuff though....i'm sorry we havnt talked latly at like all... i really do hope your doing good