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Reunited

Tuesday was the hardest day of my life
I watched with tear stained eyes
as my babies left me crying.

I'll never forget holding the two of you
while I kept saying it'll be alright
you'll come back home soon.

It was raining outside
as we held each other close.
I'll never forget the sounds in your voices
and the looks on your faces
when I told you that you had to go
be with dad for awhile.

I heard one quiet voice say
"Who that guy in Kentucky far away?"
From the other quiet voice I could hear
"Mommy please don't make us go."
I know that you will soon
understand that it wasn't my choice.
God how I love the two of you so.

My life's so torn and shattered
I don't know what to do.
I just pray and pray each day,
to be reunited with the two of you.

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  • teardrop gold member
    January 8, 2007

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    Beautiful

    I am so sorry for I know your heart aches right now. I can feel it in your words. I am sorry I didn't take the time to read your home page, I guess I should have. How long are your children going to be at their dads? I also take it they have not seen him often for your poem makes me feel this man is far away from them in heart.
    I hope all works out great for you my friend and don't worry, their mommy loves the infinity and they know it.

    TD


    • di ivers
      December 10, 2007
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      hey beautiful sorry im just now getting your comment things have taken a turn for the worse. my ex-husband the ass that he really is now has my two oldest angels...I miss them so...But all I can really say is what comes around goes around to all those lousy F)@#s that want to consider themselves men and havent learned yet how to be a man. Ive come to realize that most male gender humans are classified somewhere between abusers, users and players. I've dealt with them all and am so sick of all of them.
      love and miss ya

      ~~DI~~


  • JaydensNanas
    December 18, 2006
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    Oh my gosh Di whats going on with you??! this is SAD!!!!!!!!


    • di ivers
      December 19, 2006
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      thanx for the comment kelly on my poem and thanx for calling me last night it really eased things a bit

      ~~DI~~