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Kiss Me

Kiss me better my little friend
Cure my tears
Hold me close
Fight my fears
Kiss me better and take the pain
Your my drug that's keeping me sane
Silver glittering in the night
Give me the strength and will to fight
Hold me back in times of strife
Save me when i'm ready to take my life
Kiss me better and please save me
If anything happens
Take all responsibility
Tell them it was you not I
Who told me it was time to say goodbye
I never thought of such words
Never thought of such things
Never thought of myself as an angel
A broken angel with torn wings
Silver glittering in the night
This time it's right
Kiss me better my scarlet knife
Tonight's the night
You steal my life

Author notes

Random little poem which I was kinda of singin as a warped lullaby. Yes.. I am mad... crazy and twisted... He He

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  • Defective Soul
    December 17, 2006

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    A really good piece. Flowed perfectly and was worded great. I really can't find anything wrong with it. Keep it up and stay safe.


  • csflut
    December 17, 2006
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    nice

    i like it it flowed it had an awesome vibe that a piece that even tough it was random means so much more or am i readin into it too much love is a cool thing more than a feeling in my opinion it is a surviver a hero the one thing that sometimes keeps u goin


  • autumns rising
    December 17, 2006
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    me too babe! its ok though


  • Luv A Surfa Gurl
    December 17, 2006

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    At the beginnin i thort u were talkin bout me... lol... but i workd out ur talkin bout ur blade. i was upset. but still. i love the poem. its very sad tho.
    i love u.
    duckie.
    1 week to go babe!


  • TommyTRASH
    December 16, 2006

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    Hehe....yes ya are! lol. This is really sweet, Caz. Very nice....warped. lol. 'Tis a cool write.

    Tommy xo


    • CazzieJade
      December 16, 2006
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      thanx XD Lol... it is warpd but that's me.. im writing out all the poems i havnt printd.. my hand is sore..

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