The nights of burning anger.
I feel it on the inside.
The sickening pain that turns the stomach.
I feel it on the inside.
The door slammed directly in the face.
Feel it on the inside.
And no one on the outside knows just how I feel.
A sadness beyond any description.
I can't explain it now.
A challenge of ducking and dodging the blows.
I can't explain it now.
A fist planted squarely in the jaw.
Can't explain it now.
And no one on this earth can explain it to me.
Take back the words soaked with fury.
You feel it on the inside.
Tattered nerves, raw and on edge.
You feel it on the inside.
The cause of it all comes from within.
Feel it on the inside.
And no one can help to make it better.
The late nights belong to us.
A contest entry
- Your worst Nightmare - Contest by dutch2lips.
700 points, ended December 28, 2006, 15 entries
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very cool . and made me feel. good luck to you.
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i felt this in my inside, very emotional and confronting write !
Living in fear is indeed one of the worst nightmares.
I know that change is always hard but not impossible to do (this of course my own personal opinion and certainly unqualified in which ever field to offer advise to anybody)
thank you for entering my contest and good luck in it!!
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