I sit here thinking of you
My heart beats wild and free
My body begins to plea
I long for your touch
Your hands so loving and strong
I call out to you in a loving song
As my body begins to ache
You kiss my neck,
And your hands begins to explore
As we fall passionately on the floor
You overwhelm me with love
You enter me-
My soul has been set free
My moans get louder
As time draws near
I close my eyes,
And my soul touches the skies
Please tell me what you think
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As the person says below, just give spelling a quick check over!
I partiular liked this line "And your hands begins to explore
As we fall passionately on the floor" Very good write
Well done -
it's a good poem, but could use some spelling corrections
'As my body begins to ach(e)'
'My soul (h)as been set free'
not sure if u meant that or not, but there are my suggestions
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