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Forgotten Soul

I sit here and have to laugh
as tears of pain run down my face.

I am told of what an angel I am
and how wonderful a heart I have.

But then when it comes down to it
no one sticks up for you.

That is so funny
people say what you
want to hear.

Boy was I nieve
to think they were serious.

I can't help but give up
on the people
that say they are my friends.


Right, friends stick by you
not sit back and watch
as someone trashes you.

But hey, Tha Rev once told me
"Life Sucks, Get a Helmet".

Well Rev you were right
and I am off to buy it
in a dark shade of purple.

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Not sure where to put this. Not from vampira or Tisha.  They both gave up I think!
Written May 21st, 2003

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  • Greson De Winter
    December 25, 2005
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    down to earth and real!

    hey this sounds great just wonndered if you might like to read my poem it's called lost then found


  • June 2, 2003
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    it is sad that people just tell you what they think you want to hear, though it may be far from the truth. it's happened to me far to many times and now i almost can't consider people friends anymore. i have a blue helmet, but that's because i always run into things. . . sorry, i'm a dork. brilliant write and thank you for commenting on my poem. cheers.

    : moose


  • TeKajo
    May 28, 2003
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    [ ah, third poem...third totally diffent "style"...and from reading your comment, i think i now understand ][ very straight to the point piece...nothing alluded...just "here it is, ingest"...which i like, until it is force fed to me like some poems... ][ and ilike the last three lines...somewhat angry but still with some humour ][ very good ]

    [ ViNce ]


  • alone in this world
    May 26, 2003
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    ^_^ .. i liked this peice.. life is a bitch.. this poem explained it well.. when everything seems fine.. friends surrounding you.. te sun shinging.. ect.. somthing happens.. somthing BAD happens.. and your friends scatter.. right when you need them the most..*hugs and kisses*.. i'm ALWAY going to be here for you Tisha . this was a great write.. thank you for sharing.. :).. hehe.. i'll be your purple helmet.. ^_^