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Heaven is the woman for this man

She says her name is heaven
And that she feels no pain
But when ever I look into her eyes
I can see those storm clouds turning into rain
Shes everything that you want in life
And when shes lost inside of your eyes
Heaven calls her out by her name...

Heaven -- Is a woman for every man
She dosen't believe in evil --
And she will keep you safe in the palm of her hands
If you can feel -- What is she feels
Then maybe you would realise that heaven
Is a woman for every man...

She wakes up in your arms
Looking like a rose,
Knowing that you've set her free of her scars
And when shes dancing naked beneath the stars
Every body knows that heaven would never do us any harm...

Heaven -- Is a woman for every man
She dosen't believe in evil
And she will keep you safe in her hands
If you can feel -- What it she feels
Then maybe you will finally realise that heaven
Is a woman for every man...

Thank God for heaven
Thank heaven for God
With a woman like that
I'll always be as hard as rock...

Repeat chorus fade...







Author notes

I guess you could say -- That women are the next closest thing to heaven because without them life here on earth would just be plain hell..

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  • poison rainbows
    July 9, 2007

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    This is absolutely beautiful. passionate, dedicated.....purely amazing. the best i've read in awhile.


  • pearl-dragon
    July 9, 2007

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    I thought I would return the favour and
    read some of your words. So glad I did.
    You say so much here. If only all men felt this
    way about women. You seem to have read us very well.
    Warm and seductive words. I enjoyed every one of them.


  • Twilight4Eternity
    June 26, 2007

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    wow I would love to hear these songs. They just really captivate me. You've done a marvelous job here.

  • Chase N Auburn
    June 21, 2007

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    speechless

    OMG I LOVED THIS ONE!!!! Gotta get this to music.. just gotta.. I love the repetedness... This one is awesome !


  • SandraMVeinot
    June 18, 2007
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    'Heaven is the woman for this man'...

    creative.....exploring....list goes on.....you have a talent to write novels....but little do I know...it's just my thoughts flying around again...

    anyways; thank you for read...and for sharing it with all of us here and me too...

    as always...


  • blue20bunny
    May 31, 2007

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    these lyrics were sweet

    i was drawn to this basically because this shows a true man. someone that sees a woman for who she really is, and doesn't take us for granted. it made me feel appreciated.. thanks robert...


  • Dragons Lady
    May 29, 2007

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    Beautiful

    Wonderful. The words are soft and gentle showing so much love and emotion.
    Heaven -- Is a woman for every man
    She dosen't believe in evil --
    And she will keep you safe in the palm of her hands
    If you can feel -- What is she feels
    Then maybe you would realise that heaven
    Is a woman for every man...

    I especially like that part. It seems to sum up the entire poem. Of course that is an opinion. Well Done..

  • cherchezlafemme
    May 24, 2007

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    Your poem reflects gracious reflections of heavenly love it's totally beautiful. Just perfect! Love these lines -
    Shes everything that you want in life
    And when shes lost inside of your eyes
    Heaven calls her out by her name...
    Yours words are very gentle, warm and loving for this woman There is a serene lightness in spirit which makes your poetry fresh and free. The love is strong. Best regards. xx


  • the pauper prince
    January 22, 2007
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    fantastic

    i loved it.

    you have taken the words right out of my mouth. i was thinking about writing something of this nature...but you've put it so elequently, i don't think that mine could compare.

    lovely job


    rich


  • DonnaSanford
    January 11, 2007

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    Great Work

    Robert these are great lyrics.
    I really like this stanza the most

    She wakes up in your arms
    Looking like a rose,
    Knowing that you've set her free of her scars
    And when shes dancing naked beneath the stars
    Every body knows that heaven would never do us any harm...

    It spoke to me I guess....beautiful honey.


  • cherche -d -ame
    January 7, 2007
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    what a beautiful tribute to women all over (for some reason though I get the impression that you might have had one particular one in mind)Nevertheless...I am sure that all who read this will smile at these words
    reenie


  • Cannonsfire
    January 7, 2007

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    Hehe Must admit I'm with Dustookie2 on this one! Howling it with ya and what a nice thing to give women this kind of tribute.

  • acytra
    January 7, 2007

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    She says her name is heaven
    And that she feels no pain
    But when ever I look into her eyes
    I can see those storm clouds turning into rain
    Shes everything that you want in life
    And when shes lost inside of your eyes
    Heaven calls her out by her name...

    this is beautifully written. I love this stanza. Touching.


  • aligurl
    January 3, 2007
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    Damn Straight

    It's good to know that someone will still love their girl and appreciate her for her worth


  • dustookie2
    December 16, 2006

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    oh a man who knows the worth of a woman...i like thatyou got the pack howling this one out babe.....without argument this is a truly beautiful tribute to all women yeah we make life hell at times but that goes both ways. beautiful words a reflection of your talent and purity of heart brilliant babe.

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