i just want you to know that
these days that i haven't seen you
my feelings are being devoured
by the sinister doubts of your personification
in my heart i know theres something wrong
with you, yes with you
i just want you to know that
i don't care anymore
i don't trust my instincts these days
you have a mask that does not
reveal your true face
i have wasted my time again*
i have wasted my time again*
i have wasted my time again*
i have wasted my time again*
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let's not Pretend
[you know, i know, we both know]
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don't smile at me
pretend to like me
say things thay i want to hear
don't tell me nothing
don't talk to me, at all
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow!! I love this poem! I'm sure many people can relate. I think that everyone wastes to much time on at least one person in a lifetime! But the plus side is that in time we will move on. Thanks for sharing with us. I really enjoyed reading it.
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Wow! Great work here!! I love the anger and the passion that just reaches out and slaps the audience in the face, to give them a taste of the anger and pain that the protaginist of the story is going through. Nice Job!!!
ASM
AKA Raymond -
i reali like this poem...spec wit the repetition
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awe. this is a very understandable peice. i like this peom because you bring out the fact that you dont play games and your just straight forward. oneday you will find someone true. have faith
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