You stand there,leaning softly against the door frame.The sunset's glow through the window provides a pink illuminous appearence to your frame.Your bare,pale shoulders appear as floating orbs in the shadows.The image of you now is like a reaccuring dream that feeds my souls darkest desires.Some nights,i watch you sleep,peacefully,soudly,wondering what dreams or thoughts occupy your mind,in your child-like innocence.This love i feel is pure.As pure as the plum purple robe that drapes your backside even now.Oh i wish,I could no longer sin against you!Even now,you appear before me as an aged,graceful tiger,your intense eyes fixed upon mine.Loving,is losing my sanity,languishing in the disgraceful sin.
To love you,bearing this dread upon my heart,is my only salvation.You walk towards me,smelling of primrose,your eyes a deep sea blue.Your kiss is fire.Oh fie,this incestuos feeling,if only you knew of my true murderous nature.This amber colored fire is almost burning out.
(This poem is from Claudius to Gertrude-from Hamlet)
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I remember reading this in class, Hamlet is definitely a different style of writing poetry. But overall it was worth the effort of reading. the book and poems are a good way to reflect on how a poem should be structured. Though everyone has their own way of making them.
