I go down inside this feelin'
Everytime we're alone
I go swimmin' in your blue eyes
[yeeaah]
Its like divin off the deep end
Into waters unknown
Kinda scarey but its alright
[yeah]
'Cuz im goin
Overboard
Over your baby blues
Fallin in sink or swim win or lose
Im going over the edge
Over my heart over my head
Im goin' overboard
All over you
Author notes
oky doky...
this is a song snipit i wrote a long time ago, that i just ran across.... i thought i'ld post it since i havnt posted in months... i know that it doesnt make sense with out the music but o well... hope you enjoy
Please tell me what you think
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Finish it ....
... I'd love to see how all comes out. Being a musician/singer/songwriter myself, my interest in these types of pieces always intrigue me.
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I loved the swimming in the eyes part. I just imagine a swimming pool shaped like an eye and someone swimming in it by themselves. You should try to finish this, it has a good start.
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Deep
This is an amazing write.
'Fallin in sink or swim win or lose'
I love that. Fallen in suggest they didnt want this to haooen, but the choice they want to make is obvious. Lovely work -
very sweet words with a lovely flow for a song..
I could easily imagine the music to go with your words..
nicely done
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Fabulous!
how beautiful...really simple,honest and to the point! im sure its great as lyrics. i also think over board is quite an extreme term for love as such, but very perfect.
i think this was a really good write!
xxxx
divaT
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If I had a girl that had blue eyes I would do the same.
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Kewl
Great lines... the lyrical flow is so obvious. I'll keep my ears open in case I hear on the radio sometime.
Cheer, Kj
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this is good, keep it flowing
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such a sweet loving poem, very beautifully written with passion deep from within your soul great penning
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I have to admit, it's kinda cute. I pictured music in my head to it while I was reading it, so it made perfect sense.
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it is so good, can really realate to it!!! keep up the awesome work, and good luck on more writes. ~wynter~
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lol, this is awesome, using eyes and water as the same thing, i liked the yeah parts lol kind of like i was really listening to it it flowed so well
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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