Wanting to die
You took me when you were drunk,
you pushed me away when you were sober.
My mind is full of lies, and my heart sunk
as tragically as the titanic. Over
and over again I play
everything in my head.
What you would say,
was the complete opposite of what you said
to my heart.
Claiming it was my choice,
meaning I knew from the start
that you are but a whore. I tried to voice
my opinion, but it was ignored.
To you love wasn’t a feeling.
I love your poetry, it should be stored
in a frame. Kneeling
down on your knees,
is how I want you, and I that’s what I meant.
You would ask, please
give me a massage. You were going to vent
all your sexual tension
on me.
Not to mention
you wanted me to be
married to you.
I knew it was a lie,
I mean that’s all you do.
Hearing anything about you now, makes me want to die.
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Firstly, I am sooooooo sorry that who ever this was about hurt you. This poem is beautiful in all its sadness. Your wording was good and the flow was great. I love all your emotion. Amazing job and keep writing. I'm here if you ever need to talk.
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this is a beautiful poem and im sorry you got hurt. its amazing what alcohol can do to a person. theres a lot of pain in what your writing and i hope things get better. great poem and keep writing
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This is really sad. I think it is a good poem...
Well good job
Love123
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Tragic situation you write about here - no one should have to go though this experience, but many do - both men and women are used by those who say they love them when drunk, and then leave them when sober. My poem, Loving a Drunk, relates to this topic, and how some enable drunks to continue being who and what they are. The best thing to do is walk away. Sentiments well expressed in these lines - easy to read and understand what you are saying here.
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Wow...sad poem...sound like you got hurt really bad...sorry for your hurt.very good poem..i liked it..has a good flow...good words...nice peom again,
Jammi -
This poem is unfortunately true of both men and women. It is fortunate that you have gained the wisdom to realize the truths so that you will not be victim again. This is a very well written and enlightening poem. Well done dear poet.
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Me too!
I like this, there is so much truth in your words! Drunk guys, are crap they build you up and then knock you down when they are sober! Damn You drunk guys! anyway a great poem! well done!
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