wear not your iron vest,
lest it put you in a trance.
put down your ignorant guard,
let me show you false romance.
don't you want to know God?
I'll show you the way to return.
I promise it will feel like love:
it will not burn.
good. now you ned just wait.
trust me, its all in fun,
can you see God, where are you?
has the show begun?
A contest entry
- How do you feel? by Drewce.
370 points, ended December 25, 2006, 19 entries
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Good write but a few spelling errors but who cares lol Thanks for entering that and i am trying to find God again so i liked this and needed to hear one about him good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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