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I thought you were my friend.

Lies, Truths, and deceits.
I thought you were my friend.
One that I could count on
To always be there till the end.

Laughter, Sunshine, and Guys.
We would always sit together,
Every day at lunch.
Watching cute guys from afar,
And laughing but we didn't know why.

Plays, Trust, and boyfriends.
You said I was with him,
Snuggling, if nothing else.
I did nothing of the sort,
We sat together, nothing more.
Don't let blind eyes tell you whats right.

Silence, Tears, and uneasy stomachs.
Refusing to talk to me,
I couldn't explain.
What you thought you saw,
And why it caused me such pain.

Offence, regret, and backstabbing.
Offended to have called you my friend,
You thought so little of me
That I would do something I never would.
Your supposed to trust me,
I would never do that kind of thing.

Truth, Friends, and realizations.
Nothing will ever be the same,
because your accusation was blasphemy on that day.
Now I finally realize,
how much I matter to you as a friend.
I could die tomorrow,
And it wouldn't make a difference.

Author notes

This happened to me and a friend. We went with our school to see charles dickens, a christmas carol, and afterwards she wouldnt talk to me. She thought her x-bf had his arm around me.. but really the teacher made us sit next to eachother to keep 2 other friends appart so they wouldnt talk. We did absolutely nothing, though. I hate him, and would've slapped him if he even tried.
She refused to talk to me or believe me when I said
I would never do that, and then finally started talking to me like nothing happened 3 days later...

((and i chose number 6)) =]



--Edit: September 2nd, 2007--
Wow. I actually forgot this ever happened, and it's sort of weird to look back on it. Kind of funny. Since then this friend and I have had our ups and downs, but I think she's forgotten about that instance where absolutely nothing happened. Anyway, now we're in highschool. I'm in honors classes she's in lowest levels, so we don't see eachother much.. :]

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  • LaurenJ
    August 20, 2007

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    I have a friend who was just like this.Your best friend can be your worst enemy.and i think your poem is awesome.some friends are just uses.


  • Angelic Princess21
    December 23, 2006

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    great

    good poem been there it hurts i like the first line in the stanzas you have really makes the poem look interresting very good write keep up the good job
    ~~Angel~~


  • XbeautifulyXbrokenX
    December 21, 2006

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    wow

    this is good!! you have no idea how many times this has happened to me!! and i never did nething that was the worst thing!! neways great poem!! loved it!!


  • FallenAngel09
    December 15, 2006

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    Thank you so much for your entry into my contest, your talent and hard work are very much appreciated. I loved this poem and am sorry this happpened between you and someone who was supposed to be your friend and trust you enough to come to you with her suspicions. One problem, however, there was one expletive in the last stanza and one of my rules is no swearing, so please take that out. Any way, great write and good luck


  • WriteOrWrong597
    December 15, 2006
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    This poem is really good. I hate being accused of something I didn't do, especially by your best friend. I liked the first line of every stanza. It was a creative way to write the poem. Good job. Good luck in the contest and with your friend!

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