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The Voice Inside My Head

I cry each night,
I cry each day.

I can't stop thinking about it,
no mater what they say.

I tell myself I'm fine,
but I know I'm wrong.

I told myself that,
for way to long.

It's just screaming,
inside my head.

It won't shut up,
even when I'm asleep in bed.

I know I'm lieing,
I know why I cry.

I have been hurt,
that's why.

Maybe if I stop lieing,
and admit what's wrong.

The voice inside my head,
will stop screaming that terrible song.

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  • bananasfoster42
    September 28, 2007

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    this is an awesome poem. might i suggest fixing "lieing" to "lying". btw which option did you choose? thanks for entering =)