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Crimson Wisteria


 

Through drapes of crimson wisteria

                                       wet on my face

I hide amidst the jaundiced ferns

and malevolent water lilies

that loiter within and

upon a stagnant pond

in which water moves              

but does not flow

 

                                         alive with decay

 

a mercurial tortoise

                        slowly dying

                                   from quiksilver poisoning

easily outpaces my hair that

cannot blow

                                        with no wind in it


 

I hear the shrieking of

telepathic tadpoles in my ear

undone by the injustice

of growing into frogs

and not princes

                                 there is no magic in a kiss


 

not for them

 

a bright future

lily pads

and plump flies

leave them cold.

 

                           Is that all there is?

locusts rub backlegs together

synthesizing a portentious sound

a prophecy,                                     

                   a warning

 

 

          darkness coming


 

The moon plots floracide

looking upon the bright-faced

marigolds with malevolence
   

Resenting their mime

of Solar polarity

the greatest

compliment is mimicry

 

no flower here

 

                                 is silvery

that fact does not

escape the illumination

of the moon's cold

                                lunacy

as it slips up the

lip of the world

appearing

 

                     scarlet

through the

rose colored

lens of ions in

the atmosphere

 

                  Waxy-faced

white

water

lilies

colored

 

                    stained

 

by the moon's 

garnet rays

to

                rusty brick

 

hue of spilled blood

long forgotten,

                          or never known

 

lamented only

              ... by the spiller of it.

Author notes

This is posted under another name in a closed contest that I didn't want to remove it from, because it recieved the gold. Since this contest allows prewrites anyway, I have just renamed it.

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  • Sanity-Day10
    September 20, 2007

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    I love it, everything in italics just brings out the essence of pure poetry in this. The line spacing is fantastic and just everything about it is wonderful.


  • PerVirtuous
    December 17, 2006

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    This is absolutely brilliant.

    I am lost in the labyrinths you have invented... every time I come to a dead end, I turn and see another winding passage, equally fascinating as the last... what a fabulous mind! Thanks for sharing.