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Her

I hvae this feeling
I know it's true
I don't know how to say this
But I love you

I never thought
I could love again
However I do
There is so much to gain

Thanks to her
My love is on the brinks
It's people like her
That make love stink

I tried telling you
Exactly how I felt
I thought you would understand
All cards have been delt

She is standing the way
Between me and you
You say you love me
I wonder if this is true

I have to say this
To her and her alone
You are doing me dirty
You have crossed the wrong zone

I had this feeling before
And I still do
I've tried making obvious
But she doesn't get the clue

When she gets the point
If she ever does
I'll be the one to tell her
She is the one who destroyed true love

Author notes

Ok so this isn't one of my best writes but it was a way to express my feelings. I had relized I was in love but someone I thought was a friend was tring to get with the guy i loved.

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  • PVT Praters Girl
    December 15, 2006

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    Great <3

    Honey! Whats this about?? Details, details!! You never told me. I know I havent been on here in awhile but Imma start ok?? I need to add a few poems and stuff. And redo my page. Mite need your help. Youre posed to be visiting me soon adn I hope you do cause I miss you. But if you dont come........ Immma cry =[[[[ Lol. Seriously, tho, you better come and I mean it!!!!! I wanna see you. And I think this is a great poem. Honest. I just dunno what its about... I wish I did. Im kinda worried... But I knwo you adn Robbie will get thru it, you always do adn Im here for you no matter what, I swear. ILY. TTYS I hope <33


    • kentucky lover 2006
      December 26, 2006
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      REALLY REALLY OLD

      But this was to robbie rite after the JROTC trip... But I am so happy things changed I dont know what I would do if they hadn't... But Thank you For the wonderful Comments....