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Write About It

It's hard to take these days
Hours crawl
Minutes drag
Moments have no meaning

Cup after cup of caffine
Drag after drag of nicotine
Brother clock reads 5:33
A dot declares it to be of the AM
In thruth it's 4:33
But who cares what a clock says
When you've nowhere to be
No one to talk to
Nothing to do 

A single person sits
Cuddled up in blankets
Snuggling with pillows
Speaking to only those
Who can't talk 

Lord Pen
Goddess Papirus
Accompany this journey
Never saying a word
Never uttering a sylabol 

Darkened memories
Flash back quickly
A simple reminder
You chased them away
You did it yourself
You're alone
Now write about it 

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  • david0go0away
    February 28, 2007
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    very true


  • serenity silvermoon
    January 20, 2007
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    we are all alone sometimes

    i loved your peom very sad but very true but dont feel bad we are not the only one


  • Touchof1der silver member
    January 15, 2007

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    There was a time when I thought it was good for me to be alone. I even tried to convince myself that I actually "PREFERRED" being alone... no one to have to answer to, no one to worry about, cook for, clean for, buy for... Ugh! It was all a facade! I am one of those people who does not like being alone. I thrive and glow in the company of someone to love. But I do know how it feels at moments like this.
    ♥ Touchof1der


  • Alittle2lost
    December 15, 2006

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    Phenominal.

    That is absolutly Breathtaking. I think it's one of my favorite things i've read of yours. Bravo.... really... i'm taken aback... it's beautiful.

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