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Final Test

You're a sick piece of shit
and stupid as hell.
You'll die a lonely death
and we'll all say oh well.

You're a disgrace to mankind
and deserve not a cent.
Hell's gates will wide open
for your wanted decent.

Let the truth be known now
or noone shall rest.
For there he now leaves
with nothing but the best.

He thinks he's all that,
but I have more than him.
and someday soon
it's his pride he shall trim.

For he's loved by not many
and hated by the rest.
Satan will spread his arms wide
to give him his final test.

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  • whits end silver member
    December 26, 2007
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    What goes around comes around! Good job getting that anger out!


  • J Rhys Davies
    December 19, 2006

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    Well, I must admit that I am taken aback at the emotions that are running wild on this. I am totally not used to your being this upset. But it is always good to release those feeling when they are plaguing you. I think you did wonderfully on this from a “poetic” standpoint. Kudos to you hon!

    ~ John


    • di ivers
      December 19, 2006
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      john thank you for the comment as well as the applauses...yeh i was irrate and still am irrate but hopefully soon very soon things will be better

      ~~DI~~