i love life
through good and bad
life goes on
through happy and sad
don't waste time
we're not here too long
okay now
lets break out in song
lalalalalalalalalalalaalalalalala
hehehehehehehehehe hohohohohohoho
hahahahahahahahahaahahahahahahaha
no self image just simply be
so you be you
and i'll be me
be now not then
don't think of the past
and we will all be free at last.
A contest entry
- Living by Angelrain.
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we're not here to long
should be we're not here too long - please correct
simpley should be simply - ill should be i'll - please correct
This is a very meaningful poem. I will consider this a form poem, even though it is not a classic form, because I can see the form in it. I like the form, the content. I love the song of syllables in the middle. Thanks for entering. No bunnies during the contest. -
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i fixed both i love life and a scary place
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Wow! Three bunnies for this one!!!
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Uh oh...you have your dad in you. lol. This poem made me want to sing with you!
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awesome!
TERRIFIC!!!
I always say, be the best you can be. Live life to the fullest. Keep on doing that. Very well said here.
Brian
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