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[ The Bishops Lament ]

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There once was a Bishop from Wapping,
who accepted an invite... (no name dropping)
his dioceses states,
"that not one of his mates,
helped him out, when his drink...
belly flopped him";

He was found in the back of a limo,
looking just a bit like, "Captain Nemmo"
with a shiner, to boot and a lump
on his snoot, tossing toys at the
kids...stood there grinning;

Now the outcome is plainly in view...
as the Bishop, is left home to stew,
as the "Father" above, sends to earth
a white dove...with an asprin, or maybe a few...





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  • Pink Absinthe
    December 15, 2006
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    lol this is really cool and funny, love the rythmn and rhyme in it!! best of luck in the contest!!!


  • KevinDunn
    December 15, 2006
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    Thank you

    Thank you for entering and for the interestingly pastoal picture, with its freight of subtle ambiguities and resonances. However, even making due allowance for a certain laxity at Christmas, I cannot quite accept this as a limerick

  • ea silver member
    December 15, 2006
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    well done and appreciate the funny one you left for me, as well. All the best in the comp!


    • cutiepie gold member
      December 15, 2006
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      Lol, thanks for your kindness Shame the contest holder didnt appreciate it still, I enjoyed writing it and thats all that matters