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I wish

I wish that you would see me
For who i really am.
I wish that i could turn back time
And be with you again
I wish that were a lie
But nothing is closer to the truth
I just wish that for a moment
I could sit and talk to you.

I am glad you make her happy
trust me, im glad to see thats true.
But i wish that you could see
How much i really miss you

I miss you as my supporter
My sweetheart and my friend
I miss the phone calls late at night
That i thought may never end.

Our flame is far since depleted
And i cant say i want it back
All i wish is simply that
We talk rather than attack


XoXo Sammi

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  • Dark Savant
    December 22, 2006

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    As good as any...

    Awww... well, in my defense(ya know i gotta say it) you can call me too.... but i will try.... i know i say it alot, and i normally fuck up at it.... but its all i can do unless you help out.... Im really kinda confused right now, but if you ever need help you can still call... I still have my advice, and Ican still give it.... If this isnt about me... oh well its damn close and im self centered.... im sorry,.... really good poem though, one of your best

  • NomadicSoul
    December 16, 2006
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    Very well-done, Sammi. The words flow together quite nicely.