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Struggling Poet

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Tired words are spoken,

with the passage of time,

with the hope that tomorrow

will lighten the crime...

of a thief in the night,

holding all of the cards...

when it comes to the penning

of words... from the bairds......;)

 

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  • kendhal22
    March 28, 2007

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    This is cool

    Great picture. Looks like he is wearing boots being in his scruffy self. Almost reminded me someone I once knew. Kendhal22


    • cutiepie gold member
      March 29, 2007
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      He is a favourite of mine...seems to fit the "mood" more often than not


  • CountryCousin
    March 27, 2007

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    Oh I like.

    I positively like this and there is a fellow on one site that the picture would fit. Where on earth did you find the great picture? It is so neat.

    • cutiepie gold member
      March 27, 2007
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      Lol, glad it made you smile The picture was probably "borrowed" at some time but if you would like to use it, left click on it and save as:


  • Pink Absinthe
    December 15, 2006

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    OMG! This is one seriously sex write! Oh wow, I love everything about it...it's sleek and deep with an air of power behind the rhyme. Almost sounds like and old trad song with the haunting aspect of Scarborough Fair or something! Well done this is excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Love the image of the theif holding cards, adds a bit of mystery to the whole thing, lovely personification!


  • tawk gold member
    December 15, 2006
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    This is so cute I just loved it, keep up the wonderful writing my friend

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