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To me crakheads (thank you)

For.....
the dreams made
the smiles given
the questions answered
the music played
the sorrow forgoten
the hearts touched
the wounds healed
the laghter made
the ime spent

Thank You:
me little crakheads
(in the loving way)

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  • So Strange
    September 5, 2007
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    Nice write, Crimson. I enjoyed this a lot because it was simply said and a peaceful write. I also liked the flow and story behind this poem, as well.

    I also liked how you started the poem off with For... that's something that really made the write a bit more dramatic and good.

    Keep up the good work!

  • siegethedead03
    January 4, 2007
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    Awesome

    sorry it took me so long to comment on this one Aj. i really like it, im gonna print a copy of it so i can hang it in my room. eighteen more days. . .hhhhh i wish you weren't going but at least you can visit and so can I.