Beatiful girl with pretty eyes;a world of hurt and lies
She sits up in her bed and cries;it's hard for to realize...
Love isn't all 'weak in the knees' and 'butterflies'
She loved the man with her life,
she realized that the man isn't what he was.
Promises only end up like lies for her.
Saying I'd be there for you.
I watch her suffer and I watch her hide everything,
Wondering how cruel a guy can be.
Not caring how the one they call love,
Is in pain and wants to end up gone.
Love isn't what it looks int the movies,
It's the opposite.
Someone always gets hurt in love,
There has to be pain in love or it isn't right.
She's smart and cunning but does he know that?
Does the man she loves;even care for her?
Or is it just he wants to do something else.
How much longer can she stand this?
Thinking everything is wrong and is suffering
Does he even care for her?
We hope so...
Or else she is gonig to have a painful life.
No one should let one person feel pain,
both of them should feel the same.
Love isn't all 'weak in the knees' and 'butterflies'.
Bella Knoll
6/30/06
A contest entry
- Tears Are for the Living by x Gemini x.
600 points, ended January 12, 2007, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Friendship by LaVieBohemme.
450 points, ended March 12, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pretend This Is A Cool Contest Name by Rainy Days.
675 points, ended June 22, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What are ya thoughts?
Comments
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This is a beautiful piece. However, I don't really see how this fits into the contest guidelines. If you can tell me how it fits in, please do, otherwise I'll have to remove it. Thanks
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WOW!!!
great! Best of luck in my contest!
~bandgurlpoet~ -
First, let me thank you for entering my contest.
Second:
This poem was very touching. The flow and imagery was very well done. I suggest the use of puncuation and capitlization for a professional look and easier reading.
Otherwise, this was good. -
I love you sis......
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