Watch the demons fall from heaven,
As the angels rise from hell.
See through my eyes,
I am one of those who fell.
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The flesh of the "righteous"
Tastes so bitter sweet.
Watch in disbelief,
As your "Gods" suffer defeat.
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Why do you hurt?
How'd this come to be?
If you're looking to blame,
Then looks towards me.
I
I shred your dreams apart,
With a knife sharpened by lies.
I rinse away the blood,
With the tears in your eyes.
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I am the reason for yor pain.
The cause of your disgrace.
Just look into a mirror,
And you'll see my face.
I'll never stop hating you.
Please tell me what you think
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hmmmmm. no one seems to love/hate us like we love/hate ourselves, do they? good write. and PS im sorry its been so long since ive commented, havent forgotten you just had a lot going on.
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I love you, You will never cease to Amaze me. You are so incredably talented, you shouldnt need my Validation But know that i am so incredably jealous of your writing style. You've invented a class all your own, Somthing that no one could compair to, a raw honesty that so few can articulate. One day i hope the world can see what a brilliant and beautiful mind you have, and apreciate your words, because through them i see your soul. If Kurt could read your works, i know he would smile, i mean that in all honesty
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this is wonderful, i love how you incorporated the word "PAIN" between each stanza. This piece reads very well, and each line is written very good. I dunno what else to say, I absolutely loved this piece, great job keep it up!
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