Our kids had introduced us
And we hit it off at once
We became so close, so fast
It was like it was a blur.
A friendship built on little things
But what we had was more
A chemistry that was taboo
I was sure I was alone
Until the day you joked with me
And I realized you felt the same
It was not long until we played
A night that was so grand
Touches and exploring
The night was filled with fun
Instead of feeling it was wrong
I wanted you even more
Our kids are not as stupid
As sometimes we’re wont to think
We went out one night
To hit the town, and party until dawn,
The kids were safe at home in beds
Fun for one and all.
What a way to end the night
But in a bedroom locked away
No prying eyes could watch or hear
No distractions in the near
It started with just kisses
Hands wondering everywhere
Teasing and pleasing for us both
As if we did not care
Tongues mingling, bodies entwined
I knew that you were mine
It could not last forever
We knew it in our hearts
But
If only for one single night
Princess you were mine
Author notes
(wont adj. Accustomed or used: “The poor man is wont to complain that this is a cold world” (Henry David Thoreau))
slipperssun
In a list
A contest entry
- contest 2 by This heart of black.
450 points, ended July 18, 2007, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Amazing write very tasteful and well wrote my friend
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Awsome
I love the way you told your feelings in the story..
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I really like the way you told this story. very sexy.
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Wow!!!
Tongues mingling, bodies entwined
I knew that you were mine
It could not last forever
We knew it in our hearts
But
If only for one single night
Princess you were mine
That is erotic, but it's so tastefully done. Bravo!
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WOW I absolutely loved this. It is sensually written with great imagery...I also liked it because you can't tell the genders of the characters.....Great write.
**Ktulu Blackwolfe**
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Sensual beauty. Acceptance of the inevitable union of two kindred souls.
Tongues mingling... Nice line among nice lines.
My hand is still above the desk though
Chris
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Nice Piece!!
I love this!!! Sensual and hot!!!! Well Done!!!
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Very good I love the whole for one night thing you are mine. It really good thanks for entering and best of luck.
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Sensual
Tastefully done
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wow!
this is interesting, but good
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Ooh, now this is a stunning and beautiful write! Such a beautiful moment only to happen in one glorious night. ~sigh~
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Oh how touching!
***I love the picture.. It's absolutely gorgeous!***
I don’t like the ending It has to last forever. Not just a single night. It must it must last for ever for you.. (Sorry I don’t like sad endings on such romantic poems.) However, it does make the poem feel more like reality than fantasy. Which is a good thing.. I’d like to point out something that kind of confused me and it was this line right here: (As sometimes we’re wont to think) I’m not sure what that means. This is a great poem for the option you chose.. Thank you so much for entering and good luck to you in the contest……. Kassie. -
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i hope that clarifies all that problem. i pit the definition in the author box to help out anyone that is stuck
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wow wow wow
i clicked the button to fast...lol..i must say if you read between the lines...lol you say a great deal....
partying with you darl was a time that will live within my memories...always.. and for me at present the memories are still very much alive within me...
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WOW it was
lol always a pleasure to see your responses...
just tellin it like it was though
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oh yeah and it was WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!!!!!mwah
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