Knowing a friends in pain
Can make me feel the same
Not knowing what to say to them
To help them make it through
I think of the suffering
That I know you are feeling
And wish I could make it go away
But be honest with yourself
And true only to you
Eventually you’ll find your way
If you need me know im there
A shoulder to cry on
Someone who cares
Someone who thinks
You deserve the best
Someone that said
To hell with the rest
Think of the future
A sun brightened one
Not of the past
Where darkness prevails.
Reach for the moon
The stars are all yours
The ground will be cushioned
If you shall fall
A contest entry
- Pre Write Contest by SensualWhispers.
615 points, ended March 15, 2007, 100 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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good
If you need me know im there
A shoulder to cry on
Someone who cares
::: This is my favorite part:::
Thank you for entering my contest -
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I have read this one and I felt this poem is an extremely kind, loving, compassionate read.
I really like this poem a lot. Thanks for entering and the best of luck to you. Kassie
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wonderful sentiment, very touching dedication. Yes this one is bumy, more so than most of yours, but easily fixed should you so choose!!
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this is so nice of you. I have pretty much the same feelings when friends are in pain. It's sometimes really hard to go there and help them with your own pain, but some how you find a way to do it. I love your ending. It's just awesome how sweet you are. Kassie -
You're an inspiration!
I don't know what's going on with me here. But for some reason the ones I have clicked on have been diggin deep in my soul, my heart. Your words here I find very encouraging and supportive. Words I needed to hear. I think there is a greater force that's giving me that extra push! That extra guidance.
Heh.... dare I whipser three little words to you?? I think I shall.
I LOVE YOU! You are the cooolest and wonderful friend I made in you!
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beautiful
mmmmm the mood im in this brings tears to the eyes...lol
what its like to have a friend like you is pretty damn amazing!!!definately beautiful write love...xoxo
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Thanx Princess,
with you lately tears seem always near. i hope you can find your way through the mist of your life at the moment. chin up
mwah
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