Virgin ears,
But I've seen the words
Haven't ever heard
What it is I thought unsure.
Lacking a trust
Tempted to move foward
Languid wires surpress me
My own thoughts twist inside
By your words unheard.
Press in,
Keep out
Move foward
Make distance
Say your words
Hold still your lips
Quiet,
Touching this life
Feeling something new
Pressing in.
No angel here,
I've never had my wings
But you've noticed my halo
Standing on silver wires.
Thoughts pressing in
A new kind of modesty frightens
An angel's thoughts.
A contest entry
- Make My Heart Melt by madgirlslovesong.
345 points, ended January 13, 2007, 31 entries
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Comments
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interesting concept... i like your writing style a lot!!
good work!

