I would like to be your husband,
time with you I would always spare,
If you ever need someone to talk,
know I will always be there,
nothing you say would ever bore me,
I would comfort you through your times of tears,
I will be a friend that you can always count on,
through out the years.
We share alot in common,
I also get really depressed,
having someone you can relate to I find,
is a great way to get negative things of your chest,
I also write the darkest poetry,
it's just sometimes how you feel,
letting out all the things that haunt your mind,
is a great way for your heart to heal.
I hope I am someone you will consider,
to be your special guy,
if chosen I promise to be there for you,
From now till the day I die,
even if I am not chosen,
I would still like to be there for you as a friend,
If you like the way that sounds,
you will have a pal to end.
A contest entry
- LOOKING FOR AN AP HUBBY by real irish rose.
450 points, ended December 14, 2006, 3 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Awww
This made me want to cry. It's a beautiful heart felt poem and the rhyming aint hal bad either its not fake it has come natrually. Are all your poems as good as ths? I hope so
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ah james hope you find an ap wife before christmas
you will make a wonderful husband james as you say in yours words said with heartfelt honesty and a lot of love. I wish you well because whoever accepts you will be one very lucky lady....
good luck in the contest a good friend you are
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I love this James.. You really have knack for writing soft, and loving poetry... I am so impressed...Good luck in the contest..I hope you win..But she's the one that gets the prize
much love..Dusty
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Oh Gosh this is very beautiful, I am just sorry you also have to suffer this illness because it is something I wouldn't wish on my worst enemy.
You sound like a beautiful spirit and a man that has a heart of gold, thankyou so much for entering this is beautiful you have really touched my heart xx -
James
You absolute sweetie, any woman who doesn't want you is flat out insane
You have proven again honey just how wonderful you are, and how amazing of a mate you can be to someone
Beautiful as always James
I wish you nothing but the best of luck in the contest
Stay safe
~Amanda
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not bad at all
Hmmm, I think maybe you used too many words to say something fewer words may have said better. You also misspelled a few things, other then this I do like it its nice to see something postive once ina while you know.
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