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Brother, Friend

You stood by me in the hills
You helped me as i grew

You made me happy
No matter what

You know exactly how to
Make me laugh

Now you no longer are my friend
You are the perfect brother
I have always wanted

I know this thank you is overdue
But the meaning is the same

You have helped make me who i am today
Thank You
My Friend
My Brother

Author notes

This is about a friend of mine who has helped me through middle school and is now helping me through high school
Christian- You still aren't getting those model rockets

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  • emmyj
    March 15, 2007
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    very sweet

    hey swan hater! this is so cool! you're a really good poet. see you tomorrow.


  • hangin out with you
    December 16, 2006
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    THANK YOU!

    DANE I CANT THANK YOU ENOUGH! THIS POEM MEANS SO MUCH TO ME! I AM ALWAYS ALWAYS ALWAYS HERE FOR YOU DANE!!! through your relationships, and through your times of trouble, i am here to the end!

    BROTHERS FOREVER!!

    CHRISTIAN

  • katsoccerqueen
    December 14, 2006
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    aww thats sweet dane


  • roses and thorns
    December 14, 2006
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    w00t w00t-go Christian! lol-great write!


  • madgirlslovesong
    December 14, 2006

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    woohoo! the Ode to Christian!!!
    well it is good, and sweet!! (i didn't know you knew how to be sweet!! hahaaaaa)
    no but it is great!

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