This man is so hard on you,
But it's only becuse he loves you.
And he's been pushed around,
He knocks them back down,
He's just trying to live each day.
And you'll have to fight with him,
In the end to understand him.
He can always gets the job done,
Don't mean he feels like he's won,
And sometimes you can make his day.
When it's us versus the world;
We just have to make our way.
We don't get an ultimatum.
Nobody loves us, nobody sees us.
We're not the kind who win.
Nobody needs us, nobody sees us.
And I'm not the cunning kind,
But you're stuck with me.
This girl is bad for you.
And in danger she will put you
She will test all your limits,
Your mind and all within it.
But she's just lost and looking for home
You know that she needs yoy.
And that is all that drives you.
She's searching for her missing parts,
You want to help her with all your heart.
And soon we can make this her home.
Even though we're thrown together,
All the parts are fitting in now.
And she'd do the same if they tried to hurt you.
Nobody loves us, nobody wants us.
But who ever needed them.
Nobody needs us, nobody sees us.
And he'll stand up for you,
becuase he is stuck with you.
And you have a place to fill,
And no one else can have it,
You don't have to ask for a thing,
just go ahead, you grab it.
You're held so dear. You're held so near.
And no one else sees the best in you.
We do.
Nobody loves us, nobody wants us.
You want us, we love you.
Nobody needs us, nobody sees us.
He needs you, she sees you.
And you are stuck with us.
Author notes
Right... this poem is one about depending on others and learning how to understand others. Kinda like a family dynamic. Despite what the world thinks of you or how rough it gets, someone loves you and wants you around -maybe alot of people do. It could be about firends, family etc. Just people who love despite everything and who love you despite everything. You can have everone in the world hate them, but that won't change how much you think of them.
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- Write me a world, write me a rhyme, write me a tale of yours and mine. by Midnight-x-Rose.
400 points, ended December 19, 2006, 34 entries
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and that someone who luvs u is ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but in all truth this is a realy nice poem!!!!!!!!
liv it!!!
*hehe*luv u!!
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I totally agree with you... There is always someone around who will care for you and love you, you just don't always see them as sometimes they are that lovely little lady down the street keeping an eye on you... joking, but seriously, good message coming across... Thanks for entering and good luck!!
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I really liked that one. It was long but really kept my attention (which is hard to do...what with me and my short attention span). I can see the imagry that you made in it this is a very very good poem
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This is really really really good.
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