When the sound of your breathing
Is all I can hear...
When the warmth of your touch
Is all I can feel...
When the image of you
Is all I can see...
I know I'm in love...
Author notes
As corny as you can get lol and yes, it's a bit cliched, but, cliches become that way for a reason, right?
P.S.
Can you tell i'm not in love? 
Please tell me what you think
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
glad to see that your in love!!! good little piece, it is very cute!!!! All of this is feel myself with my girlfriend when I am with her!
-
oh my GOSH! there is such sweetness in the simplicity of it. It's breathtaking and beautiful and kinda makes you sigh at the end you know?
*sigh*
Great job!
~noir
~
-
CUTE!!!!
i am glad that you have found someone like that.
its a great feeling isnt it?!
anyway. this is adorable and i was reminded of the one that i love and that was very nice.
so thanks
and thank you for you comment you are really kind
♥ Meleah
-
Lieeessss ;P
Who u in love wid chica?
Great again. Cliche or not.
Btw, diz Diann. Name change.
-
i like this i am on love and i understand exactly how you feel...or well as this pooem makes you sound as if you would feel but seeing as you dont know how it feels ummm....confused...ok...you showed love in a good way
-
-
Hi! thanx so much for your comment! I'm glad you liked it
-
Adding your comment:
1 - 6 of 6
