As I gaze into your eyes
I feel my passion for you rise
as our lips and tongues meet
I can taste your sighs.
I feel your body tremble
as my hands stroke your lace
I sense your needs my darling
as I tenderly stroke yor face.
Warm thoughts of loving you
pleasure as tongues entwine
moist lips begin to wander
I am yours and you are mine.
Hands so soft feel you rising
stroking gently among sighs
oh my love let me please you
I see passion in your eyes.
I feel your hands touching gently
stroking my desire for you
as my desire for you rises
we will no longer be blue.
We search for passion in one another
so long since we've felt true love
our passion's reach boiling
close together like hand fits glove.
Our desires begin peaking
come put your love inside of me
to feel the power of such passion
my love for you is flowing free.
You have taken me to Heaven
stay and hold me through the night
let us hold on to this passion
till the early morning light.
Please tell me what you think
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This was a great read very well done
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Very romantically sensual. I like the ending where you mention the holding one another till morning light. That sounds so nice.
Azlyn
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WOW!
great poem!so much emotion and passion! keep writing...
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just visiting this love scene again...still alluring!
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lovelustre
Thanks again for you read
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HOT
I am thinking of the right words to say right now but I am at a loss...You created a wonderful passionate poem here and I need to have a cool down...
Thank you for sharing this with us and I look forward to reading more of your pieces...
Much Love
Tessa
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I'll Stay
Loving this, so sensual and sentimental. I love the holding thru the night the best. I love a man who knows he has to cuddle afterwards. You're a wonderful writer from what I've read so far. Can't wait to read more from you, so get to writing young man!
Oh and thanks for the comment. Feel free to stop by anytime. Hugs~ Cuddles
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let me clap, clap, clap!
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Sensual and alluring words of love you speak here, with rhymes that blend in softly with the love...sigh.
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So beautifully passionate...wow!
Much enjoyed the passion and so very tastefully done! Well done, you two! -
This was awesome, is awesome! You really get me scared and exited reading it! I feel like I can feel what your talking about... "You'd stir up my insides like a hell-fire storm". Wow! I'm amazed by the power in this, so good, so strong. It overwealming, kinda makes me nervous in a good way. You make me wanna feel this way. That part of me that's out for adventures. It's a great write!
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Sooo Beautiful!
Guys, the is absolutely beautiful....so much passion...so much love....so much enjoyed the read....hope to read more of you...smiles, Terry -
EXHILLIRATING!!!
...VERY BEAUTIFULLY PUT!! you give me fever!!!!
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Whew! Wonderfully done, excellent job on this one. According to the other comment, this is what passion is and true love and being in love. Another beautifully written piece. Good job.
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Now that is some serious Passion and what another Magnificent collaboration~
(wipes steam from monitor screen)
The Heat rises and I imagine the senses too
I felt like a voyeur after inhaling this Masterpiece~
So I will just remove myself from this page and
You two can commense
-tiptoes out of comment box-
Oh~ Keep that *ink* flowing~~~~
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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