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I killed you yesterday


Fated to desire the kill, the shattering of human will.
My heart favors the flesh.

They can claim otherwise, Blood is dashed and then he dies.
My design to cause death.

Demented though glad, gratified then mad.
Passion dies in a breath.

 


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  • Flipped out Flippy
    December 11, 2007
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    Chilled here

    Yes yes, this poem describes me very much!


  • AmberMoon
    October 16, 2007
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    Oh My! O my! o my!!! This is awesomo stuff!! 1,000,000,000 STARZ 4EVA!!

  • AmberMoon
    December 13, 2006

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    Eeek! You have exceeded the darkness that once was my poem, which is now a piece of monkey's poop compared to this. And the rhyming was supurb!

    • Reedurnuthinelz
      December 13, 2006
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      Uh, thanks...

      Yeah, I dont like the last two lines at all...and Oh gaud I cant stand looking at it anymore...you lucky cuz you write tonz so and cover up all your old stuff...I wont write anything for weeks!!