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On 13th December

My Natal Day

How Great is the Lord of Heavens and Earth,
Who blessed me with life and vigilence and mirth,
I am sinful, thankless tiny man,
Pay my gratitude to Him on the day of my birth!
My Lord excercised mercies countless,
His bounties can be neither counted nor assessed,
His kindness finds no limits, no bounds,
I pray to Him whenever am depressed.
The Lord is source of all joys and delight,
His favours elevate me at sublime heights,
His love and care is only asset,
His forgiveness make my days bright.
Thank you my Lord for bestowing me soul,
Though full of dust is the span whole,
I beg Thy pardons in future and past,
Please leave me never, begs humble soul.

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  • December 26, 2006

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    Happy Birth Day

    Oh...I forgot to wish you a warm happy birthday on 13th December..Hugs and congratulations for writing so beautiful!

  • Dancing Doll
    December 26, 2006
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    Great Poem

    Great spiritual poem dear Mujtaba on your natal day...Belated happy birthday to you..


  • Vernal Bloom
    December 18, 2006

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    Dear Bhai Zaidi
    Again you cheered me up with your majestic pen and fabulous muse. God is great and so almighty and I’m so glad to see you shared your privacy with Him.
    I think it’s a bit late but HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DEAR MUJTABA. I think God has blessed us with a great person on 13 December. Again sorry for lateness in congratulating you your birthday.
    Thank you for sharing with us :-)

    ~Massy~
    P.S. I’m hosting a spiritual contest as “Write a letter to God” I’ll be glad to receive an entry from you. http://allpoetry.com/contest/2334443


    • Mujtaba H Zaidi
      January 17, 2007
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      My kindest Ma'suma!

      Your kind wishes and beautiful words are more precious than jewels...Thank you very much. I wish you a very Happy and Bright New Year...May Almighty bless you, family and friends (aamen).


  • Vernal Bloom
    December 18, 2006

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    I’m so glad to see you shared your privacy with Him.
    I think it’s a bit late but HAPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DEAR MUJTABA. I think God has blessed us with a great person on 13 December. Again sorry for lateness in congratulating you your birthday.
    Thank you for sharing with us :-)

    ~Massy~
    P.S. I’m hosting a spiritual contest as “Write a letter to God” I’ll be glad to receive an entry from you. http://allpoetry.com/contest/2334443


  • Lyre-Bird-
    December 13, 2006

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    This is quite a spiritual write here.... It flows well gives a peaceful overall feeling to the reader.
    Your title fits well
    thank you for sharing
    Tracey


    • Mujtaba H Zaidi
      December 13, 2006
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      Many many Thanks

      Thanks dear Tracey for your warm appreciation.............May Almighty bless you, family and friends!


  • individuality gold member
    December 13, 2006

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    this is a good spiritual piece of poetry which you have written here, it has a good rhythm to it, an enjoyable read, thank you for sharing. spill ink and twist me into the crazy shape of love...


    • Mujtaba H Zaidi
      December 13, 2006
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      Thank you very much

      I am really moved by your kind words..May God bless you ever!...Thanks a lot dear Individuality!

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