i’ve been squeezing my mind
like an orange moon
for ways to describe him –
could pass him by on the street
and not recognize eyes
behind the mask
problem was,
the dominance of care
and smiling pieces of advice
cannot be measured in liters
nor anything solid:
words used to denote
what lies behind
in the simplest of ways,
a man of mastery emerges
from the compact mass
called society…
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I see this is dedication for someone I'm not familiar with yet I can so relate to it, too. Well done, diana.
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This is gorgeous-- I love the imagery of the orange moon. It really made the piece tangible to me.. gave it a scent, a taste a smell.. wonderful stuff-x
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forgot something
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thanks you, your words have made me smile and i am so happy you wrote this for me it means a lot to me you are one of my great friends, keep it flowing
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Thank you. I'm glad you liked it
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I know how you feel, putting Aaron into words is definatly something that can be perfectly accomplished. He is way too multi-dimentional, which is exactly why we all love him right?
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