Hello Father,
first of all,I love you more than anyone else.
But then you know that,because you gave me others to love.And you know thoses weak times I have,when I'm unsure if you're still listening? I won't say it doesn't bother me,because it does. But then you know that too.
You gave me free will to think,so I know the silent treatment is a test of my faith. But then,you know that too. Well,it seems to be you know my every thought and deed before I have and do them. But I still needed to say I love you,even if you knew that.
Love as always and forever,
Suseann
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Yes, is know all and sometimes is quiet. A lot of times so we will be quiet enough to hear Him. Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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nicely done......that personal relationship is best. when you can talk freely and openly with all the emotins he gifted us with...that is real...and honest...and more personally fulfiling and such a prerequisite to real soulfulness....
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This is such a beautiful prayer-poem, Suseann--(You already know how I always say all poems are prayers and all prayers, poems). I believe so much in speaking to God as to speak to a friend, and you have so well expressed this by this write.
Best wishes to you in the contest...I truly enjoyed the read!
Jo
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Sincere and from your heart...
Suseann,
Lovely poetry because of your humble
honest yet loving thoughts towards the Lord.
♥ ♥ ♥
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There is so much truth within these words. They have hit home very hard indeed. Very very powerful piece here, also beautiful as well. Keep writing.
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THIS IS SO TOUCHING!
This would make a most beautiful prayer my dear friend.
We should all open our hearts like this not only at Christmas but all year long.
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