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nightmares

blank pages and dry eyes
because the words never sound as good on paper
as they do in my head

and i'm way too busy
writing i hate you's
and hiding hearts in envelopes
burning love notes in fires

at night i'm holding hands and hearts
wrpped around pillows and other boys
pretending it's you lying next to me
and just waiting for a better day

and i like my nightmares
better then the dreams i have of kissing you
because you're not real

Author notes

this definatly isn't finished yet but i have to give credit to autumn becaus esome of this i took out of her old notebooks

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  • nous. gold member
    September 13
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    hm, whoa.
    know how that goes:/
    sad.
    love the ending.


  • darkeyes08
    April 13, 2007

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    hmmm this makes me think.."wrpped around pillows and other boys
    pretending it's you lying next to me" Lets hope that thats changed, shall we!
    Love ya girly!


  • noir eyes
    December 18, 2006
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    this is really really really really good. =o


  • grand theft autumn
    December 13, 2006

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    I thought it sounded familiar lol. I can't wait to see it finished. I need those notebooks back eventually...
    <3 you

  • X-o
    December 12, 2006
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    its pretty good so far can't wait to see it finished

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