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Can't stop ever falling in love

Why does your sweet love hurt me so bad
Your kiss feels so good then drives me mad
Your love is all from you i ever take
The pain you return will cause my herat to break

You're like a siren calling my name
I just can't seem to be able to keep away
Why did i fall in love with you when it's not a idea
It'll just bring back all my darkest fears

One look
One touch
One kiss and i'm done
I just can't stop ever falling in love
I've tried to quit but it's just too tough
And afterwards i feel so rough
But i just can't stop ever falling in love with you

You can lie because i'll always believe
You can scream but i won't want to leave
When you were here i fell in love too soon
You may have changed but i still love you

Love is like a blessing and a curse
I was never sure which one was worse
I hate this person this love has made
I just wish she would go or at least fade

One look
One touch
One kiss and i'm done
I just can't stop ever falling in love
I've tried to quit but it's just too tough
And afterwards i feel so rough
But i just can't stop ever falling in love with you

These words are from a heart red and raw
I've got to say it because i can't take it anymore
I've lost what for so long i've yearned
It's like in front of me my soul's been burned
One look
One touch
One kiss and i'm done
I just can't stop ever falling in love
I've tried to quit but it's just too tough
And afterwards i feel so rough
But i just can't stop ever falling in love with you

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  • Bapudi
    May 26, 2007

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    okay

    I didn't even read the whole thing. I knew it was a finalist when you spelled heart "herat" in the first stanza.