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~~My Other Half, My Soul Mate~~

Good morning Mr. Soul mate
How was your night
I wonder what you're dreaming
If you dream of me
Like I dream of you
In a place where I can feel
The beating of your heart
There's a special way to say it
There's a special way to react
With a smile on your face
The more I really care
The more I get to know You
I want you and your beautiful soul
Could you be the one for me
You tell me that I'm beautiful
Sweet, loving and kind
But you know my story
Where I come from
I don't know but I believe
That some things are meant to be
I can feel my heart open again
It's opening for you
Just come in Mr. Soul mate
I do believe in destiny
I’m a believer
Something tells me you’re the kind of guy
I'd like to get to know
We'd be lovers and we'd be friends
Were survivors
We made through the storm
Your smile whispers through my mind
I think you need to know
So use it as a bookmark
Common destiny
We were meant to be
Me and you
My other half, my soul mate




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This poem is dedicated for those who are single and who would like to find their soul mate...So if you think you've got it....if you feel it inside you don't let it slip away


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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 9, 2008
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    Like you said, if you think you got it keep to it
    Nicely done
    Thank you and good luck


  • sunnystar
    February 22, 2007
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    ah this just struck me

    I ll love to be your soulmate and from where we begin its just right here my love you ll love me the way you ll be loved by love it means to be the one for everythin and to be loved is truly to be in living


  • Manoj Sanyal
    December 12, 2006

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    good

    It is an emotion filled poem in simple language.A believer's call towards soul mate destined... nice.
    Best wishes,


  • babybrat140
    December 12, 2006

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    cute

    this is a very moveing poem... it makes me love my man more and more... cuz haveing that one special person is some thing really special.... but i really like this...

  • Chief Callahan
    December 12, 2006

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    two thumbs up

    Hey sweet grace, this is extremely wonderful. Words can't decribe how I feel write now after reading this, but what I can tell you is that you have outdone yourself. Bravo


  • MotorcycleFreak silver member
    December 12, 2006

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    What a great idea!

    An open letter to a potential soul mate. You remind me of a friend I knew from the Philipines. I use to visit there very often. Your voice reminds me of her. Good luck to you. Excellent poem!

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    December 12, 2006

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    This is beautiful, tis wonderful to find a soul mate such as this, I have found mine and he is everything you described... such vivid images here... thank you for the great read

    Karen

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