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Imprisoned

I’ve kissed your lips…
How well they know mine
Tasted your breaths and smiles
The taste of you branded within
the deepest part of me…
Your laughter against my throat
Whispers against my skin…
And I melted into the embrace of your eyes
And the galaxies swirling within them…
Love, sweet, love
I tasted it, I felt it, I held it…
But I was blinded to it…
Though I saw the sunlight streaming
Through your soft hair, I never saw you
I never saw you…
Until now
And I wish time could be turned back
Now that I see you more clearly
But you never get that second chance
No matter what amends you try to make
The moment passes you by
Love passes you by…and finds another

Now standing here, filled with bitter regret
I am unseen…
Once everything and now…
Simply invisible…
Hidden by the folds of friendship
Love doesn’t know me anymore

Held tight within your arms…

Imprisoned

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  • Never too Late
    June 14, 2007
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    Simply }}} the best


  • peperminty889
    March 20, 2007

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    wow this is extremely good!!! i have been saying that to a lot of people lately but i seriously mean it to you!!!! hopefully this won't happen to me n' my bf...weve been going out since december (a record for junior high) and i must admit, i have felt 'improsened' once or twice, and even my starsign says i like to be free
    thank you for making me smile and the beggining, cry at the end,
    guacamolly