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Knife Master

Light as a feather
Hard as steel
Sharp as an eagle's eye
And painless as death

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  • rainy kisses
    January 9, 2007

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    this is kinda nitty gritty and down to the point. i like how short it is. i always enjoy puzzling over your poetry. thank you for being here and for all your comments on my stuff. : )+


  • Melodies
    December 12, 2006

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    HUH? This is kinda scary...

    A sharp poem, for sure! I like short poems because they are always right to the point. This one cuts right to the heart. Fine writing, for sure!