My soul is dieing
My heart is turning cold
My smile is turning upside down
My tears are flowing
My love is ending
My lonliness is growing stronger
My hope for tommorow is no more
My mood is always bad
My attuitude is depressing
A contest entry
- Love is the slowest form of suicide... by Yours-To-Have.
500 points, ended March 22, 2007, 79 entries
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Comments
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Very nice poem. I liked it alot. Good luck in my contest!
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Pure darkness, I see... well, I feel you. Thank you for sharing the read, as depressing poems/songs remind us that we are not alone. We're all in this together.
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Very sad poem
I know what you are feeling. Everyday I am not with you it seems like there is something missing in my Life. I want you to know that I Love You with all my heart and I can't wait to see you tommarrow.
Love Always and Forever,
Luke
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What a sad and depressing read. Sounds like you are missing someone or something. Well Chin up cause it will get better. Keep that pen flowing.
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