“I could fall in love with you”
Song once again played
On my technological advanced cell phone
Heart just missed a beat
While hands started to shake
Dare I answer or just let it go
Puzzled, confused, I just stood
Next to my computer table
Cell phone playing my song, just stopped
I closed my confused eyes
Looking above, all I said, Thank God!
Here it was again, playing I could fall in love with you by Selena
I knew the ring so well
I dropped on the floor and just sat
I slowly with shaking hand
Took the buzzing phone
Silently I said, hello!
All I heard was a sigh replying, gentle hello!
How are you?
I’m fine!
How about you?
I’m doing just fine
Conversation ended
As soon as tear dropped on my hand
I said by and hung up the phone
Took the keys and off here I go!
Cold SUV ignition started
Heart was racing
My hand were shaking
Mind said No, the heart went with my soul
& straight slammed my breaks
Right into his Christmas driveway
The Santa Claus was waiting,
Rudolf was sledging
While the night lights were sparkling
They were all eagerly looking
Starring at the road
All for me, so it seemed
Battling heart and mind
Finally are wearing out, getting tired
Mind was once again won over by feeble heart
The past gone, but not forgotten
Was once again strong enough to pull me in
Towards the lost frontier of love
I knocked at the door with our first Christmas wreath hanging
Taking back to where I had started
The door opened, our first Christmas tree was lighted
Eyes were numbing oozing warm tears
As I stepped into the house, into his room
Where all the memories of last Christmas came
Back to me gushing, throwing me back in time zone
Not a word uttered
Tears were rolling down the cheeks
Hair all messed up
As I unzipped my coat
One glare in his eyes & coat fell off my hands
One step towards me, I stepped back
Back, all the way back to the cracked wall
The closeness was unbearable
Silence was roaring with our heavy long sighs
As he reached for my face
I closed my liquid eyes
His tender masculine hand wiped my tears
While his fingers tickled my hair
I missed you, come back to me
And, all I had to say was nothing
He held me tight close to his broad chest
Hugged me like never before, so tight
No air no sound, nothing had a chance to cut through
And lend me his shoulders to lay my head
And I busted into waiting tears
Longing for to hear his gentle voice
A long awaiting relationship was once frozen
Building a crystal sharp icicle walls in between
Drip, drip, it was not finally melting
One tender touch
One masculine breath
His masculine calm hands
His well done fingers
All stroking my natural facial skin
Slowly calmingly went for my lips
And that was it
Strong tender wet kiss
As our tongues twirled inside
As if virgin territory waiting to be explored
It sure was the moment to die for
All the past was now seemed present
As our moistened, glistened supple lips
Locked into current time zone
The clock stopped
Heart stopped beating
Hands stopped shaking
The frozen ice was melting
I once again gave into
The alluring moment with him to be rediscovered
From the star till the end
Just one phone call made, attended
Ending up in one long tender wet kiss
It, was all that needed
Filled with warm unforgotten love, forever I’d cherished
And forever I will cherish until death do us apart
This time I meant it
From the very core of my bleeding heart
Author notes
On e phone call all it took for me to end back where I'd started...
In a list
A contest entry
- Make It Romantic by Reflections Lived.
950 points, ended December 23, 2006, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - I want Gold Trophy Winners Judged by RedwingSpirit.
900 points, ended January 11, 2008, 58 entries
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This is a really nice poem Sweety Thank you for entering my contest I wish you the best of luck
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A true whirlwind romance to shake the age of ages. I think that any lovers would read this and appreciate the beauty that is wrapped into it, the emotion that your hands wrought in this write. It touched me reading through it, and I never wanted to take my eyes away from it. All of it made sense and it flowed very well, in my opinion. All I can say is keep it up, I will definetely look forward to anything you write. Good job, mom!
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Yes That's My Boy!
Thanks sweetheart...you, Mia & Lankan, have come to my life and changed it to being alive again.. You are my lucky charm
thanks hunfor reading and and I always love my yahooing applauds. *clapping* hehehe 
Thanks my son, my son I love the sound of it
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*tear. that....was.....EXACTLY....what i wanted. if your not 1st place...your certainly in the top three.
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Thanks Kat
Thanks hun for enjoying reading my poem and appreciate you giving me chance to enter your contest. I can't thank you enough for the honor you have given me & the faith in my poem you've shown. I'm truly appreciative. Take care 
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Awwwwwwww, I'm SOOO glad you finally re-found the love you lost, and hopefully this time it will last for now and forever. You so deserve to be happy, I only hope that oneday I will find the someone that will love me for me...
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Yes & No!
In short I don't know! I do luv him & he does love me still something huge is missing, this is absolutely the last time I'll be giving us a chance after this I won't be able to take another roller coaster ride...My dear you will find the one soon & he will sweep you off your feet & before you would know your heart will pop out & drop on the floor wait & watch, just don't let your guards down soon, take your time ..... if he accepts for you he's worth it or else it dirt piece! Thanks for reading & love your smiling applauds...
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Loved it mommy~
Awwwwwww mommy I liked this poem! Greta job! As always
Where'd you get the idea for this poem? I really like it sad a bit though! Well I'm off to read your other poems! Take care! Bibi!
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Well done
That was another great story. I thought I could certainly relate through the first half...but it just kept going! Well done.
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Thanks Arsenic
Thanks buddy for stopping by and enjoying reading my poem.. Well this did happen to me though once again very short lived...I love your wonderful comment & always welcome yahooing applauds Thanks again my friend for your time
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i can't think of what to say here, this is strong and just had me from begining to end, then there is the fact that i felt kind of like this at once, you expressed it will keep it flowing
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Hey Disturbed Prodigy
Thanks my friend for stopping by again, I really appreciate your time & love your thoughtful comments. I'm glad you enjoyed this one and thanks again for your support. Thanks for the sweet encouragement & I'll try keep it flowing...Happy Holidays & Take Care
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....well, ...based on the write you posted in the Lair...and this one...it sounds like you have found (re-found) the love you "desired"!! You share your heart with clear honesty and reveal the tremendous tenderness inside!!!
All the best to you and your love!
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Thanks Lionslove
I love your name & had to join your group. Ever since I was a little kid I always wanted lot of animals as my friends i could play with & have them as my buddies & on the top was a majestic, aristocratic Lion, I love everything about Lion. Now thanks a lot for stopping by & reading my poem. I really appreciate your time & wonderful comment. Yes I sort of re-found my love, hopefully this time for good. Thanks again for your support. Happy Holidays & Take Care.
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This is awesome. You are a marvelous story teller. I love the passion and excitement in this work. YOu are truly talented. Thanks for sharing. Good luck.
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Thanks ImmaculateDesire
Thanks hun so much for stopping by & reading my poem. I'm glad you liked it & found time not only to read but enjoying it too. Thanks so much for your support. I really appreciate your beautiful comment. Take Care.
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If you feel that its right, then it is. I am glad you are where you want to be. Sometimes things do take time and the waiting is hurtful, but this seems like it has a happy ending. Much happiness in the New Year for you and your love. Thank you for sharing your heart, it was done very well.
Soulful Woman
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Thanks Soulful Woman!
I'm glad you enjoyed reading it and it is definitely where I wanted to be, hopefully this time it will last not just for Christmas but for now & ever...I know he luvs me & I luv him, still we have miles to cover to our destination together, & by God's Grace it will be covered as I'll be rediscovered...Thanks again for the applaud & beautiful encouragement. Thanks.
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Well I hope this is what you wanted, to end up where you started I mean. The imagery was great and I love your knack for story telling, well done, and good luck
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Thanks Kare - the Poetic Whisper
Thanks a lot Karen for stopping by and taking time enjoy it and leave a very thoughtful & heartfelt comment. I appreciate your encouragement & yes, it where I wanted to end where I started...
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