I wonder aimlessly not knowing what to do.
You than rescue me from myself.
I realize that I must deal with this
world with all of it's ups and downs.
First thing I must do is make a way for
myself to be independent. Which means I
must take on responsibilitys. Take care of
myself. Be an upright person in society.
Follow the rules obey the laws. Can I
do this? I must, it is an important part
of my survival. I will set goals and prove
to myself that I can do what is expected of
me. I will prove to myself that strengh is the
key to my existence.
Please tell me what you think
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smile.
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I like this. I can see you in my minds eye, looking in a mirror and giving yourself this peptalk. Good flow, easy too read. Good write, dear poet, one we as women can relate to.
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This is such an inspiring poem and one we should take note of in our down days. I love the way you have written this and you speak to yourself to bring yourself up. Well done on this wonderful piece.
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TRULY INSPIRING!
Sometimes one just has to say to themselves to stay strong and face the world and take whatever comes.
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Wow, that is a really great poem. Keep up the good work!
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This hits home to my own heart
When I got off the drugs and started to maintain a little, the woman who was to give me 3 beautiful children, helped me to get on my feet. We both sobered up together. We are no longer together and now I face the prospect of going alone and sharing custody with her. I believe this new chapter is a new beginning to look within for the strength needed to carry on , for myself and my kids.
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Creative
This is more like a soliloquy than a poem. That is ok, it means that you are speaking to yourself. Almost like an actor on a stage who is revealing his innermost thoughts to an audience. The poem is well organized and your ideas flow smoothly, one into the other. It seems very natural, as if I were sitting by you as you make your plans for survival in this world.
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pure poetry
Again I can relate to this emotional piece, to the pure purpose behind the lettering, I love the way your poems are set out aswell, genious love as always Dan or xXxDanielxXx, which ever you prefer
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